This wuz all right.The whole concept isn't all that original.Cuz while the robitussin shit hasn't been done before...it's the same as drugs.I think the content wuz good.As for your rhyming...it wuz ite....except for the hang up/phone line..it wuz there..but didn't rhyme.But overall..decent peice.


RTF on the Open Mic I got in my sig.