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Old 09-24-05, 03:45 PM   #51
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Mystic Chaos-Hmm.U DID elevate since our battle.I'll give you that.In terms of depth 'n profoundness in your lyrics.U got it.But honestly,in terms of captivating 'n enjoyment...it wuz on the weaker side.Didn't seem to have much of a storyline with a twist or anything.And as for your flow...some bars flowed due to internals 'n shit.But for the most part..over a beat..this would be hard to flow too.

So all in all....make your lines a lil shorter.And make the content more interesting.

But for the most part...good shit.
Overall-8.0

Barr-Well...you got flow.But..when you got short lines..flow is easy to come by.But..the words you rhymes..they were elementary.U rhymed you/true/blue...like/night/nice/right...c'mon.Wtf is that?Build yourself a decent vocab.I think you have wat it is you wanna say...but damn...you need to know how to word lyrics up.And wording lyrics is not something that I can tell you to do.That shit comes from experience.

Overall-6

Vote-Mystic Chaos.