Hmm i think this is way to short for a open mic, open mics should be a story, not gay random shit. im not sayin ya shits wack but you need to give ya shit more creativty at least if your not gonna use any eternal multiples use some metaphors in there to give it that depth. ya know. your vocab was decent and sometimes i thought some shit was forced.

anyway keep elevatin man, 1

can ya rtf on the shit in my sig, or just look around in the forum for my collabs n what not.

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