yeh he got potential.....but some seemed forced.....he got too heavy on the multi's but it wasnt that bad.....just work at it a lil more.....add some humor and i hate to see tryout that only self glorify.....so mayb do like more of a battle verse that way we can see how you would handle it....and i even let you pick me as the one to diss....
cuz i wana see what you can come up with.....8-10 lines
now get to work......i wana see how you work punches and personals....then i can make a more educated decision....about whether i think you should be in