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Old 09-24-05, 09:59 PM   #54
Stanza
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

AIi This Is What Me Think

Barr

You Dropped Really Creative and I Like To See that in a topical But Yet Its Like You depended all On Creatvity and I cant give you a win based on one area of the battle I have to vote vased overall on this battle ......I think you couldve did jus a little but more better on your wording but it was not to sly of chosing in this battle jus try to up it jus alil more next time ......and if your gonna give some other details in a topical maybe on somethin relating but not on the same topic try not to sway to far away from the topic/subject shall I say I really think you have some really good style man I really enjoyed reading your verse I think that me and you should Collab sometimes in the future but anyway next time try to even out your verse in all areas if you can

Nice drop

Mystic Chaos

Your drop wasnt to simplistic yet it wasnt to difficult and I really Really liked that it made me feel like I was the writer lol But yeah I feel that you can use a little bit more advancement in the Wording area as well although it is not the key of winning the battle it is and important factor in helping to win battles so yea and your imagery was terrific and you stayed on topic you stuck it and made it clear to voters and you didnt stuff Big words together in one line jus to seem intellegent so yeah i liked that

so My V/ Goes to Mystic Chaos

Please RTF on The Battle Link In my Sig in 48hrs or Less or this vote will be removed

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