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Old 09-25-05, 03:47 PM   #11
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Voted For: Daubs

good battle both y'all....


DAUBS......free-range structure same as me, i hate forced structure's now ure flow was tight consistently, i think there was only one bar near the start that was a little choppy. u had some nice punches, a lot of original concepts in there and a couple of bars that OMFG!! they made me crack up like a fuckin madman. that one about the sewers was dope as hell. the creativity was dope as shown in the originality, although some played concepts were in there, and a couple of bars seemed a little basic to me, overall ure wordplay was dope, u used it well and mixed it up in ure punches and personals to make an affective verse, OVERALL: 8/10


NK........probably one of the best verses i've seen you put out, but thats down to the length mostly, longer verses kick ass. u had the free-range structure going on to and ure flow was consistently dope, not a single spot that went off in my opinion. ure wordplay was real good, you used it for some good punches and personals. creativity was cool in places, but the main thing that let you down is you had far too many played concepts, i think there was shit about biting style, dickriding, forcing shit, lines about fuckin his girl, sickness lines and some more. daubs had some to, but you had far too many, you did put some nice twists on a couple of them but still they were played. OVERALL: 6.5/10


V/ - DAUBS

.....purely because he had a more consistently harder hitting and original, creative verse, he had some played concepts, but NK had a lot more and his punches lacked in comedy and power when compared with daubs.

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