Voted For: Sin`cere

SIN`CERE - nice verse, a unique way of structuring it all, something I haven't seen done before. The flow was consistent throughout and you stayed on topic to all the way through. An interesting approach to the "Prized Possession" topic, not one I expected so props for that to. The vocabs was real nice throughout the piece, I think you had a nice balanced level of complexity. The emotion and imagery of your verse was real nice, made it so that the reader can picture the ideas you're trying to put across, overall one of your stronger pieces. [/B]8/10[/B]


PARANOID - a good piece, the overall flow was consistently good, you stayed on topic consistently to. the structure was damn near flawless, although the plain forced structure I find too basic and not really creative. The topic wasn't the ideal choice to use for creative ways of looking at it, but it was still good. Unfortunately you came with the predictable approach so you lose points for lack of creativity there to. The vocabs in places were nice, I feel they weren't that consistent though and got too elementary too often. The overall imagery and emotion wasn't really that strong either, and frankly I felt that your piece was just a little too 2-dimensional and lacked in anything original and good. 5/10

V/ - SIN`CERE

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