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Old 09-25-05, 08:25 PM   #9
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

codesteel-your verse was......simply dope man, best ive seen in a while actually(besides daubs 40 lines)ummm ur personals were funny on point and had proof. thats a plus..ur punches were in tact comical and on point..ur vocab not a problem made up with the good wordplay and sick name play (at the end) over all 8/10

nollie heels-reality check.....ur verse, no hate but i simply wasnt feelin it...ur lines was MAD stretched and i couldnt grasp much of a flow to be honest with you...i feel you didnt incorporate a lot of punches at all...just a lot of gibber gabber....ur personals were pretty played...if not that...just not hard hitting....u need some elevation overall 6/10

v/coldsteel

rtf please, link in sig
*if not returned in 48 hours i will remove vote*
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