Voted For: ColdSTEEL
I was surprised as hell when I heard I was to be battlin ColdSTEEL,
Thinkin how I'ma shove lyrics down his face like a forced last meal,
3...hmm...didn't seem to diss.You'll shove lyrics down his face like a forced meal?...how does that attempt to clown the oppenent?
Am I supposed to be intimidated by his 8-1 record, the 2 is up next,
I'm beggin someone to please tell this guy how to use custom subtext,*
5....Honestly,I thought it wuz worded bad.U just seemed basic with execution.But it's a personal nevertheless.So ok.
There's no timeouts for you, got him on his knees beggin "No More!",
Bitch I'll have my Mafia divide ya crew with Three 6s divided by four,**
4..WHOA..TOO compex here.I mean..I know complexity is a big part..but damn man..this is overdoing it.
Keying this verse cuz thinkin out this dude is simply a waste of time,
He's bettin that he gets some votes cuz "Nollie has stretched lines",***
5....now,this doesn't diss.U claim..that he's bettin to get votes by it.And then..in the explamation..you say that you commonly get that in ya feed.So....you kinda dissed urself a lil bit.
Don't mean to self-glorify but I think I can forecast myself as the winner,
Only time this guy has ColdSTEEL is when his car sits out in the winter,
4...why would he want ACTUAL coldsteel?His name doesn't mean that...it's metaphoricalAnd even if it did...why would he want coldsteel?.
Trigga Town Inc.? What bullets do you be pushin? yea gangsta image is fake,
This only dude you ever put in the dirt was most likely named Solid Snake,****
6..probably your best bar.
Ending this like I was 10161 days old by how I'm endind my Sweet Sixteen,*****
Hell I bet you were one of the few who actually enjoyed listening to Tony Green,
5...2nd line wuz nice.But the first line,again,you overdoing the complexity part.
All right seriously I'm done now I don't wanna make this guy get all emo on me,
Like I was an underrated X Girl I'm in jubillee cuz it's Win number 5 for me,******
4....no punch...
This Battle is less of a threat...Look!,His crew is ah Bunch-ah-Fags.
This was 'pose tah be Best of tha sets..All I get is this punchin Bag.
5..nice multi...punch wuz a lil iffy though.
Look at this an Gag......Magazines, couldnt see him on.
Hair lookin like Morgan Freeman...an tha face of tha fat dude in P.M. Dawn.Lol.
6...lmao....good punch.
This is 2 E-Z ta pluck....
........................No challenge ta defeat this s!zz.
Sent me a P.M..."Sayin Good luck." tah show how weak he is.
4....hmm..good concept trying to rip on the PM.But..how is saying "good luck",a sign of how weak someone is?
Peep this kid..Check it,he's defect'd like sumthan that drugs do.
He's not gay?...How!accept it..When he told epic.."I love You!".
6...good personal.
If thats not respect'd...Then I need ta switch tha clues.
Cuz I didnt know tha legacy let Cezars Bitch in tha crew.
5...ok...but you got too much links now.
Plus his over stretched lines show that he's a louse.
Look he's tha only person I know thats 20 sumthan an still ask his momma ta leave tha house.Ha!
5...good..but again..too many links.
So fuck it..This is over easy like eggs when toss'd from grill-s.
An his Aim name say's it all....L.F.S......means Loss From SteeL.
6....good personal.
OK.
Nollie..you went above the line limit.But I doubt coldsteel'd DQ you.U had some lines that didn't diss him tho.Like the shove lyrics/forced meal..and that jubilee one.And also..some of ya lines ain't make sence.Like..why would he want coldsteel?His name doesn't mean that..and even if it did..still..why would he want coldsteel?Ur best attempt wuz probably the about Tony Green.U need to word ya punches better.
Cold...
Good shit.Liked the fact you had a lot of personals.But next time..I suggest considering to cut-back on links.I used to do that too..and it doesn't work.
Both of you need to think your lines through tho,Cuz saying "good luck" doesn't show how weak someone is or mean anything like that.And nollie's Coldsteel's line didn't make much sense.
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