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Old 09-26-05, 02:47 PM   #10
Paranoid
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the beat you used was kinda wierd but its not bad. your hook is pretty good actually. flow is not bad the first verse it was wierd and sketchy but it pciekd up in the 2nd through out. emotion aint to bad could use a bit of work but your commin along nice man. maybe turn your vocals down a bit though. but overall nice lil track. 1
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