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Old 09-26-05, 03:09 PM   #17
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Voted For: Daubs

Damn long verses but they were both worth reading..so yeah here's what i think....

Daubs...opner wasnt as good as NK's but u still get this vote for a gd verse....wordplays were there and to my opinion they were very decent...metas were cool too and quite different from the usuals..vocab was ok not as loaded as i xpected but it was iight too...the verse kept on flowing and yeah that added a plus....and to conclude u had harder punches which keps on hitting and hitting....u had a cool verse and cudnt see anything wrong till the end part where some lines didnt rhyme like 'club with rhythm' but it was just 1 line so its understandable..



NK : yep u had a cool verse too...humour was there,opner was tight...i liked it...your verse kept on flowing and yeah structure was cool...vocab wasnt as loaded as i xpected but it was iight too..meta were there but not as different as daubs'....wordplays were there and they were quite decent...the reason y daubs gets my vot is cos ur verse was filled with personals and his was filled with punches....yeah u had punches too but they were quite less in number compared to ur opponent and they werent so so hard hitting like those of daubs...but like his verse urs was worth reading tho..


Both of u got skills and i think y'all showed it on here once again...this was a nice battle anyways...keep it up


ps : Daubs i xplained my vote better than u did on mine but what happened yesterday cant be repeated today so its iight...though i'ld just tell u that..lol
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