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Old 09-26-05, 03:34 PM   #45
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ok...merlin.

2000 post in a month, this is the result of no life rejections
^thats a double negative....should be Life's Rejections
you more like dry sex............you simply a fake fuck
That was a pretty dope ass line.
so im'a make you fuckin disapear like the casino forum
Good Metaphore

Alotta garbage with a few Gems in it. Not too bad. 6/10.

ok...killa.

not much to quote.
For one your shit is way stretched. just your font makes it look all pretty,neat,an short.
Alot of your lines were way to technical to the point where they made no sense.
simplify your shit, and you'll be better.
o yeh....and dont stretch your lines. simplicity is key. 4/10

Vote. Merlin.
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