I can tell you rushed this... it's not real, real bad since it's a draft. I want to hear the final version before I leave feed. Your flow is pretty decent some parts you rush in the middle of your bars. And sometimes it falls off. The chorus I actually like if it was slowed down a little more for the beat. I won't give it a rating because I really think this will sound sooo much better when you take your time with it and produce the final version..

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