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Old 09-26-05, 07:52 PM   #9
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Voted For: HiPnoTiK

You say ur HiPnoTiK but ur rhymes are chaotic*
Wen i spit you'll be first to fall ill cross u up like mj in Basketball
^^first off,i dont like how u set this up,how u had 2 words ryme in 1 line but then tha next line didnt ryme with it,iight punches and pretty good opener
Ill drop a bomb on u like in vietnam
beatin me u have better chances gettin a date to the prom
^gay as fuck,especially tha second line

Battling me ur dead wrong
ill smoke u like a blunt afta my hits ur gone
^^played out and wack

ur a hypocrite u have to admit it
u gunna lose like da tru cashmoney u two are fools
^^didnt ryme and gay wack ass shit again

u overuse ur words i beat u up like bully to nerds
your goin downwards like the redskins
^^wack and didnt ryme again

at least they get a couple of wins unlike u
man u stink like peppy la pu thats all i gotta say to beat you
^^semi-original but wack as fuck

Afta line one this battle was already won
thats it this battle is done so go practice some more son
^^played out and bad closer

u seriously need to elevate b4 battlin anymore...no hate tho


ya structure goes down just like ya win column
not elevatin since ya first battle, ya lost all them
^^im feelin tha flow and it was a nice punch and opener

cheap vocab that you look up on the internet
no skill on your half, dawg you lack intellect
^^nice punch...but nothin special

hadoken knock you like Ryu from street fighter
Got all ya votes from a voting cycle, lil dick ryda
^^pretty good,but not great

Clearly you see from ya name ryding things is u
Pei and big-o be ya d/r's there's proof that its true
^^i like it...nice

reppin rockland wit ya, p/m's fo my single vote
askin fo help ta elevate, put u in my hold 'choke'
^^not feelin it..but iight
you reppin the R.O.C. clan...haha ill merk that clan
Dude wit the fake personals? oh yea u are that man
^^kinda feelin it but as much

dawg i can take u out w/out a diss im my finish-ya
cuz i can self glor against ya wack verse. still i diminish ya
^^u rymed ya and ya but itz an iight closer

both need elevation but ryda more than hipnotik...nice job both...no hate...keep at it

v/hipnotik
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