yo this is a rough draft of a song im in the process of making, its the whole song but i got to re record it i was just focusing on the chorus becuase ig ot several choruses written for this and this is the one i chose and want to know what you guys think of the song before i re reocrd it, and my Cousin POnders aka DJ Raymo is on the beat one of his first beats on his new Motif, word

aight yo leave some real feed back
the song is called IF I HAD
http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce


i left feed back on these songs

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209838
nice lil track with my boy implicit singing on it
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209853
ausstrialian guy, word aussie hip hop