eFFex

Ya brain's too slow, no time to scream loud or tremble
Or even pray inside...after my fists pound your temple
First Line Is Standard Filler Slash Set It. Nothin' Really To Say About It. It Doesn't Really Bring Down The Quality Of The Next Line Or Bring It Up, Except When Grouped With The Second. Second Line Is Decent. Some Cool Wordplay Here. "pray inside" Connecting With "temple",.. Not Too Complex, But Effective. The 'Temple On The Side Of The Skull' Correlating With A 'Temple You Pray In', 'Prayin' Inside Your Mind(Temple)' Correlating With 'Prayin' Inside An Actual Temple'. Pretty Cool Wordplay, Does It's Duty. Overall, This Bar Is Pretty Decent Slash Fairly Cool. Multie Was On Right On Point. Set Up/Filler Was Didn't Reduce The Bar In Itself. Wordplay Was Accurate N Worded Pretty Good. Good Ish Here.

-Cezar-

Who are you?The kid unknown like the eFFex(effect)of Bipoler
...after im done
Like the pope orders,he getting removed like Backteeth molars
Eh... First Line Is Inaccurate. Bipoler Basically Is Opposite Or Mutually Repellent Forces. So Obviously, The Effect Is Not Unknown,.. Therefore Voiding The First Line. Not To Mention, That Kind Of Nameplay Is Very Ineffective... When You Just Include Your Opponent's Name In It Without Really Having Any Kind Of Relevance. Second Line Is Worded Very Awkward. Saying Like Twice Threw It Off... It's Like You Tried To Fit Too Much In Or Something. The Avy Personal Is Ok. Not Hard Hitting, But Ok. The "getting removed like Backteeth molars" Punch Is Ok Too. Again, Just Wasn't Too Good N Was Really Basic. Overall, This Bar Was Pretty Average. Multies Were So-So, Wordplay Was Eh, Punch N Personal Were Aight. Nothin' Really Stood Out. Ok Ish Here.

Punches - eFFex - More Complex, Better Wordplay Incorporated, N Worded Better.
Personals - -Cezar- - He Had The Only One.
Creativity - eFFex - Much More Creative Wordplay N Punch.
Wordplay - eFFex - Less Basic N Worded Better.
Complexity - eFFex - His Wordplay/Punch Was A Tad More Complex Than -Cezar-'s.
Metas - -Cezar- More Of Them.
Multies - eFFex - More Syllables N Just Sounded Better.
Vocab - -Cezar- - Barely.
Structure - eFFex - Barely.
Flow - Both
Enjoyment - eFFex
Vote - eFFex
Explaination - Fairly Decent Battle. eFFex Get's My Vote For Coming With Better Wording, Creativity, N Complexity. Basically, Those Three Things Made His Punch Overall Better N Hit That Much Harder Than -Cezar-'s. -Cezar- Did Take Personals, But It Wasn't That Hard Hitting So It Really Did Little To Effect The Outcome Of This Battle. Still, Good Shit Y'all... Props To Both Cuz This Was A Cool Battle To Vote On. Both Keep Elevatin'.

(..DD)