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IP:
Wow, This Was Pretty Intense.
...Epescially Concidering It Was One Of Your First Drops On Here.
What I Loved Is How Through Out This Apeared Poetic Beauty,
Yet Just Enough To Alow The Story To Jog This Line Of Truth.
Just Giving A Perfect Combination In The End.
The Flow, On Point As Could Be.
There Was Like 2 Bars That Were Choppy In The Begining,
But That Didnt Happen Again.
My Favorite Lines Would Have To Be These:
Like a Queen you have Rose…Sprouted Thorns Thick an’ Tall…
Human beings are Neva’ Perfect but you come close to it all.
I hope you Realize someday an’ heed my Advice
An’ next time you start thinking… Stop an Think Twice.
The Thorn Line Just For Its Poetic Purity,
Just A Straight Forward Leap From O.M. To Poem Right There.
The Other Line I Enjoyed Because It Just Hit Me,
And Just The Way It Was Worded Was Very Impressed.
Cant Even Really Explain,
The Logical 'I Told You So' Just Kinda Had An Impact On Me.
Real Nice Shit Fams,
I'd Say Keep It Up, But You've Already Elevated Since This Shit.
Stay Up Fams.
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