your pops are crazy... you sound muffled on the mic.. you rushin your flow at points then slowing down wayyyyy too slow for other parts.. I can barely understand what you saying so i can't really quote your lyrics. You sound like you want to get the song overwith right away, it's like you not feeling what you saying, so no one else is going to feel it either... as far as your delivery, you don't sound very confident on the mic... keep working at it.

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