UNF where the hell ya been?

Okay. So I heard your first audio and then I jus listened to this one. Umm you haven't elevated much. You still need to back up from the mic or something. It sounds like you tryna make out with it. The lyrics aren't very clear. You need more emotion in ya lyrics. Doesn't sound boring but it doesn't really make me wanna listen. Keep working on your flow too. Try to make it flow smoothly.