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Old 09-27-05, 06:24 PM   #16
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This was alright.

The beat was ok and i don't think the singing was as bad as everyone says, it wasn't great but it didn't kill the chorus. Does remind me of akon. First verse needs work. Not just quality of the sound but quality of the lyrics. Step up on the mic and go at it like you believe what you sayin is the realest shit. Verse was kinda wack. no hate

Second verse was good...that's all i can really say about it. Quality was good. Lyrics were alright. Flo was cool. Up the first rappers skills a lil and i'd say you have a real force here

6/10
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