i like your lil hook you did on it, the beat is real tight i think your voice fits these kinda beats better. your free overall was good nice job wit maintaining focus on the words you were using. Your breathe control could use work, cause really thats the only reason i could till its a free. i bet you was sweatin mad rank haha, anyway nice lil freestyle man. dont quit!!
can you rtf on ym track "can't nobody" its somewhere in the song forum.