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Old 09-27-05, 07:54 PM   #8
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Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?'
Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level
5....ok..liked the concept between devil/drop-down,was a lil too long thoughB]
He said Im tryna beef, damn rights, *hits him with a piece of steak*
I still 'burn herbs', your a 'Pyro-kronik'..should be a piece of cake (1)
[B]4....decent

Thought that me and Soul liked him, we really thought he was a weiner (2)
If you seen the tunes he rocked, you wouldnt wanna be his friend neither
6.....nice personal
This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night
Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right?
4...no,this wordplay was forced becuz ot didn't match sllyably
No wonder this bitch is on my block list, all he does is stalk and annoy (2)
Kid cant even serve me through text, and ironically he's a paper boy
6....nice punch wit the paper boy shit...but i didn't like how u mentioned that block list thingy again.
In the classifieds he needs a new job, cause his rap style is scary
Battling me, I leave his verse posted at the top of the O-Bitch-uary
5...decent wordplay.
I hope he aint staying on Rv, shit, he'd only be wasting our time
For all I know...
He could just be a 'pussy in a hat', and is still unable to rhyme (3)
5...cat in the hat lines are a 'lil played...but this wuz ite still.

Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G
That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally
4...forced rhyming with the "G" part that came outta no-where.Punch could have been decent if it had better wording.
When it comes to wackness you’re the epitomy, but I’ll nail this shit
And I’ll put your girl up for DIY…right after I nail the bitch
2...no,this was whack man.
You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe
Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago
6...good nameplay.
The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true
So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you
8....Lmao.I really liked this one,set-up relevant,flowed nice,punch connected..dope shit.
Fucka sailor, I aint need spinach, now vision this boy
Cos it’s true I’ma Popeye…till ya fuckin vision’s destroyed
5...decent enuff....didn't seem to diss much tho..
I love gardenin, with a spade and a shovel I’m standin coo
So I plant my seed in ya girls cooch…
…but the floralB where I’m plantin you
5...good wordplay.
I’ll smash you foo, I’ma win, no point in debating
And I’ll put your concepts on t.v…
…just to boost the antique channels ratings
6....good

OK...Close battle here.
SPek...
Try to stay away from links in battles.I used to do that a lot too...and it doesn't work.So try to stop with it.I thought you got too repitive by over mentioning the blocking his name thing...cuz I,personaly,am not a fan of beating around the bush.And You had some forced wordplay...with the a-pac-o-lips line.
Appocolypits...
After I read the 1st 2 bars...I figured you were done.But you picked it up at the end.that 1st bar was forced rhyming with the G thing that came outta no where....and the 2nd bar was just whack IMO.The rest was good shit.U kept the flow going,set-up relevant to punches...and made it hit hard.Good shit.

(you might get some hate votes due to the fact ur from RB and all..so...be warned.)

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