Voted For: 9th Degree

9th Degree:

Your punches hit hard and were right to the point. Nice wordplay and rhyming. Not really too much I can say about your overall verse tho. You dont need areas to improve, you just rip your opponents like this. You still continue to impress me with shit like this. Keep it up.

Best Lines:
8-0 after a month and you're pitiful still
8 lines shows De's Range is as minimal as his skill
Reading it right? You probably do have a loose screw, hater
So take this personal, 'cuz no one answers yours in newspapers

Deranged:

I thought your verse was terrible. Whats with all the long as words with a bunch of the same letters in them. Plus you got brackets, bold, symbols crammed in all over the fuckin place. You set your font to size 1 and its still hella long son. I thought this was a joke, really. But disregarding all that...

Best line:
all done bucked n ur album suks n stoning'z wat'd it take us to cop-it
& I read ur verses to the kor-an(koran) realized it won't make you a profit/prophet

That was not bad but coulda worded it better. ^

This was totally one-sided, plus, Deranged, you need some serious work dawg. Oh yeah another thing, dont go into that much detail with your explainations...if the punch is gunna be that intense to understand dont even use it.

V/9th.......................

RTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF:
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