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Old 09-28-05, 11:55 AM   #17
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this was pretty good. there wer some hot punchlines in there and i was feelin ya flow alot. ya structure wasnt hard to follow at all. cuz thats how do my bars sometimes idk what erebody else complainin about. but overal it was straight. it woulda been good verse for an Open mic or suttin. holla at me or my boy hitchcock for a collabo
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