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Old 09-28-05, 06:32 PM   #2
~Lady Fiya~
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i'm feeling the beat... your chorus could use some work, try not to stress your last word so hard, it sound forced. Your flow sounds better from what I heard from you before. Ya lyrics are aight. It's a relaxed track, nice to hear those every now and then. Not bad. RTF... hit the link in my sig.
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