hmmmm this is actually a unique style of writting in poetry....i see very few writters that write in that style, but very few can get away with it and you here got away with it lol....

Emotion was actually pretty good in this piece, the emotion poored out in front of the readers eyes as he read *me*.

imagery was quite vivid also i enjoyed it because you expressed everything smoothly i mean i felt as if that was me experiencing it i actually read this twice.

the vocabulary was above average man.

anyways i am ashamed to say i havn't really read any of your work before, but now that i have had the pleasure of reading some i am actually glad i finally got to...this ios a great read man and can very easily be nominated for poem of the month.
and werd when we do our collab rv will be wishing they had a hall of fame.

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