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Old 09-29-05, 06:09 AM   #12
leady
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beat is wack.... flow sounds very robotic, need more melody in ur voice get more harmonic with the beat, u wuite often speeded up to fit lines into the bar aswell, delivery is ok, lacks sum emotion n needs to be more cocky for this kinda track... lyrics are ok, but nuttin stood out, sum lines might have been better had u delivered them properly << thats for the diss track btw

before you: i like this sample, beats pretty cool.. is this guy british??? i was expectin an american lol, his flow is nice as is delivery, lyrics are pretty cool aswell, beats sick actually lol, feelin this guy quite alot actually, lyrics could be abit more complex but everything else is nice... where r you??? you come in mad late... vocals are too low, ur energy lacks next to his, delivery is better in this, flow sounds better aswell.... wow u finished mad early... decent track
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