first verse, vocals sound very bare, flow sounds rushed at times.. delivery is ok... lyrics are meh to simple... second verse, vocals again dnt sound right with the beat, maybe cud use sum more reverb... flow is abit choppy n hesitant at times... delivery ok, lyrics are average again.... 3rd, finally a good flow... delivery lacks presence though, but flow is good... lyrics are better..... ye track is ok hated the original, hate this beat, jagged edge dnt really interest me either n yall only did a decent job on ur verses