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Old 09-29-05, 04:52 PM   #4
E.C
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beat is ill an u gta send me dat.... iite you kick in... it sounds like your whispering... lyrics are kool flow drags on a bit some times like.... why is grandad viiiiioooolleeennnt... kinda like dat put more lyrics into ya bars to fill em... not bad thoughy seond verse.... this is better coz this is things i can relate to... dis hook is ll man i deffo want this beat..... iite last verse.. youe emotion is better on this verse it still sounds really quiet don't hold back whern you apit... lyrics arek ool in this verse... quality is iite could be better though,...

lverall decent track.. dope beat ill lyrics just up your flow and youyr emotion and delivery man
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