Where i hear this beat from... i got something similar if not this beat already.... your flow when you first start off I thought it was a chorus... your emotion is kinda weak. Your presence could use some work as well as the flow.. your lyrics are real simple and the rhyme scheme is really basic. Try memorizing the verses first cuz you'll sound sooo much better. It don't sound like you reading but it sound like you barely got the verse in your head. You prolly shoulda picked a different beat even tho it's dope as hell.

Keep workin at it, Intermental.

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