not to sure about the title lol
but the first verse was creative by reading that i was expecting soemthing that had to do with sex or love then u added it those last few words which drew me in
2nd verse is really good the quote at thte end was a nice little touch after the first verse the placed my body by the stairs to look like i dropped line made me think he might have dne it himself for the love of his wife that he showed in the first verse interesting
3rd verse the bank part was good a nice little twist i think u could have came up with soemthing ebtter than him wearing a vest though with him raising his shirt i tottally expected that but not too bad
the only thing id say i wasnt feeling was the ending and the flow in parts was this a poem?

anyways return feed when u can

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