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Old 09-29-05, 10:40 PM   #22
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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Voted For: Spektikul

appocolyptik-Not a bad verse, but seriously man..your structure was whack...you had no flow wut so ever to tell you the truth your punches lacked any heart..and concept...personals..mad played and simple...nothing too great...feel u need to up all over the placce.......5/10

spektikul-now this was a preatty good verse man...im likin ur links good proof...ur personals were fresh good concepts and creative...good hard hitting punches..overall great verse..structure was hott..had tight flow...good wordplay...decent drop....overall 8/10

v/spektikul

rtf man, my battles need votes......so do that asap
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