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Old 09-29-05, 11:10 PM   #27
Spektikul
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Notorious

ayo come on dawg the only reason you 5-1
cuz u make them niggas vote or they'll swallow your gun
Weak...
my punchlines are more deadly than a shot from yo gun
evrytime i battle ya'll cats..i do it fo fun
The fuck is that...
guzzling emcees like a bottle of OE
the only thing u defending is your friendship "homie"
Gaaaaaaaayyyyyyy...
im most wanted like Tickle Me Elmo last Christmas day
today seems the perfect day to test my word play
No punch again...
like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters
Dont pretend your gansta...
u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat
Omfg...

You failed to throw one punch or personal at your opponent. If I were to give a mark from 0-10 on your verse, it would be a -2 because you hit yourself a couple times through wackness. Elevation is essential for you to survive on Rv...

Mystic


Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
Ok, weak opener tho...
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*
Meh...
ya ass try's to hard ta look like that dude nah mean?
choke hold ya ass pop a gat...spray you in ya splean
Not a great punch attempt...
Skinny motha fuck'a i see how you tryin ta ride my dick
Ya rhyme like ya constipated nigga ya force ya shit
Booooo...
Elevatin ya punches....but dissin me in the cypher
P/m sayin ya dont want beef...boy i aint gettin no nicer
Weak...
Topical head at your service merkin a text head tonight
Punk ass getting hungry my shit is wut he attempts to bite
Ok closer...

You verse wasnt far off from your opponents for wackness. You also need to do some elevating yo. But all in all you won so congrats...

V/Mystic.....................