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Old 09-30-05, 12:57 AM   #50
Triple_N
Ya mom massages my nuts
 
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word I told u I wouldn't forget you so..heres my breakdown...yo your improvement is undeniable...the flow is alot smoother now....u had a few spots were it lost sum of its fluidity however...during the second half where u was flowing at top speed it was nice...lyrically is was kinda eh but it was for club purposes so I'll give u a pass.....a hook an one more verse woulda been nice but u told me story but dat so its all good....def keeping moving in the direction you are...much props from me
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