beats like this one can cause you to flow really choppy...it's almost a bouncy type of syncopation...and when you flow to it, it needs to be continuous to counter the choppy nature of the beat...for the most part, you accomplished this

I like how your delivery/emotion built up to a climax (hehee)

and your quality is pretty good...def. improve from this point last year


personal sounding lyrics



good track


where's da hook?



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