either memorize the flow like Lady said, of do what I do, and literally flow it 50 or more times before you record so that you basically "know it" even while you read it during the flow session
I don't agree that your "emotion" is weak...I think it's your own delivery style...and I like it...It's your flow that needs to catch up to the delivery...I'm not being arrogant, but listen to Triple N, Me, Tony Self, Doomsday, Enygma, for flow...
listen to how the beat becomes almost back up to our voices...it's almost as if the beat drags you along...OWN THE BEAT NIGGA
I like the lyrics here
and I like ur delivery with the voice and all
and ur ambitious...keep elevating BD
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