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Originally Posted by Tha Q.
I like how your delivery/emotion built up to a climax (hehee)
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OMFG
YOU'RE SO FUCKIN GAY!
Anyway...
the beat is dope to me.
I like the piano and shit...
ya delivery was on point, especially during he hook.
you could've added just a TAD BIT more depth to your voice during the verse though, nahsayen?
like, at some points, make your voice kind of high pitched and at others, a low pitched etc etc. you know, just add some variety, but no too much. thats how rappers become "animated"
speakin of the hook, it's aiigh, Im not gonna say its wack, Im just not feelin the "JUST CHANGE!"
Maybe if I was in a different mood.
the lyrics was decent, but your flow was a little off at some points too.
I liked your rhyme scheme though, I hate boring rhyme schemes that just rhyme a word 1 or 2 times.
you sound familar. Like a main stream artist, im leaning towards Capone...but its all good
keep doin what you do, maybe we could collab one day..
PZ