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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
From: ATL..still reppin' NYC |
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feeling the beat, homie... i'm digging the idea behind the song but not really feeling ya flow... it's too choppy and sometimes it seems as if you're trying to throw pauses in to stay with the beat or catch up with it at times.... the hook is crazy!!!! you coulda did so much more with this track... emotion was there but it coulda been expanded on a lil more by fixing ya flow... not a bad track... simple lines but i guess it kinda wo rks for this song... keep elevating... and turn ya adlibs down... they overshadowed ya main vocals... not bad... not great... i see the potential... stay up playa
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