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Old 10-01-05, 12:04 AM   #6
Ltizzle
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lmao, you aint pay for this shit...
first off i agree with ecko as far as the emotion
its a hard thing to describe but try and change it around according to each track...
cause most of your tracks do sound the same emotion wise, youll get it though.

your flows pretty good, not finding any flaws in it really
lyrics is hot like usual
id do some adlibs in a couple spots though
i think itd help give your emotion a boost, and just make the track sound better overall...

quality aint the best, but we all work with what we got...so no big
all in all nice man

find a beat for that collab
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