First of all, you ignorant fool. That looks like a lot more than 6 lines to me.

1st Bar - no point to it. it sucks. seriously. you need to elevate.
2nd Bar - would be better if you took out the cuss word. better than your first cause there was an actual complete thought in this one.
3rd Bar - umm the second line was kinda confusing. didnt quite get it.
4th Bar - okay so i finally see where this whole thing is going. but again the second line was lame and i didnt understand it.
5th Bar - ok so what does the chair have to do with anything?
6th Bar - ha ha. probly the best thing.



So you really need to elevate. Learn some new words. Learn to make complete thoughts in your lines and write them in a way that everyone will be able to understand. Good luck.