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Old 10-01-05, 12:11 AM   #1
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aiight MC got this batle

Not-aiight but you lack in hard hitting punches.....you need to work on incuring multi's in your verse to help with flow.....also...add some personals that diss the person to make your verse more effective....and dont space out your lines....just you need to elevate and work on punches...

MC-aiight good flow....your punches were harder hitting.....you incorprated personals..you need to work on flow though....add some multi's.......also you need to up your vocab as well.....but you came harder and had more punches landed....

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