Damn that shits loud

Your flow is eh, needs improvement, you have no charisma at all in your voice and it's boring. Your first first is blah as far as subject matter, sounds like some mixtape shoot em up stuff. Your second verse is an improvement, but still the flow is blah. Your story doesn't really fit where I thought the beat was headed tho if you know what I mean, no hate, just doesnt sound right. But stay droppin.