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Old 10-01-05, 07:22 AM   #14
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Voted For: Satans Spawn

Kamze

Satans spawn can't handle me, he can't stand the venom that i inject,
And this bitches lyrics like a broken light bulb......they never connect,
Uhm... Ok I Guess. Doesn't Really Make Sense As A Broken Light Bulb Can Still Connect, Just Don't Work....
Spawn thinks that i'll be commin soft, but i'll be comming at him rough,
And being sick all over the place.....is the only time you'll be spitting sikc stuff,
No. Repeated Sick And Was Just Weak N Didn't Make Sense.
He can't handle my game, he scared of what i'm about to spawn,
I'll give him nightmares, ....and he'll wake up telling people what he's sawn,
No. Sawn Isn't A Word. Saw With An N?... No. That Does Not Work.

Overall - Pretty Below Average Verse. Most Of It Just Didn't Work Or Make Sense. In Fact, All Of It Just Didn't Work Or Make Sense... I Was Bein' Nice The First Bar.......

Satans Spawn

You Couldnt "Beat Ya Mission" So Ima Beat Ya Till Yu "Missin"
And Ill Watch As Your "Mind Leaks" Like Your "Ear Was Pissin"
Ok. Not That Good Of Wordplay. Pretty Basic And Kind Of Dumb, But It's Ok.
People See That My Deep Precision Is To End This Slacker
He Couldnt "Loose Me In a Battle" Even If He "Took Stackerz"
Doesn't Make Sense. Well, Kinda... But Pretty Weak. Punch Is A Bit Played. Just Not Feelin' It.
Im The Top Smacker On The Wacker So Watch As I "Master"
This "Bate" Like I Was "Beating My Dick" So They End Faster
Blah... Not Feelin' That Kind Of Wordplay. And Some Of The Multies Are Just Unnecessary/Forced And Bring Down The Value Of The Verse.

Overall - Not Much Better Than The First, But It Was More Polished. Some Better Attempts... Not Quite Comin' Out So Good, But Oh Well.

Vote - Satans Spawn - Neither Was Too Good Or Hard Hitting, But Spawn Gets It For Having A Bit More Polished Verse And Better Attempts. As Well As, He's Just A Bit Better Than Kamze,.. On A Higher Level. Below Average Battle, But Spawn Takes This. Both Keep Battlin' And Elevatin' Though.

- Death