8/10. Overrated. Some of it was good, some of it was okay, I honestly didn't like the hook and I hate when people use the word 'strife', it seems so goddamned forced to me because it's a word no one uses but they just use it to rhyme. It's just a word to me that seems like you just use it to rhyme with 'life' or 'knife' or 'light' and it holds no special meaning, and in most OMs that have multis you have 'strife' in it. Your rhymes were predictable and your vocabulary wasn't all that. I didn't even bother read all of it because I hate reading most OMs, but I read some of this, so I can't say much about the concept, if it's about black and whites it has been used before.

And just RTF on something of mine, I might have something new out by the time you ever check this.

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