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Old 10-01-05, 12:45 PM   #8
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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Voted For: +Gunz+

gunz-your verse was pretty dope, you incorporated some pretty decent vocab although minor spelling problems..it was nice...ur structure wasnt all that but didnt take off the flow..nice man....nice punches and personals...wordplay was good...overall ur verse was about 6/10 g'job

black arts-Your verse was poorly structured. The problem with this was that ur lines was stretched and it flowed bad....ur vocab lacked any greatness...hard to see a good intact verse...ur punches really werent well incorporated....they were pretty weak, ur personals...were kinda whack..wasnt really fealin ur verse..overall 4/10

v/+gunz+

Rtf gunz within 72 hours or less, or this vote will be dq'd
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