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Old 10-01-05, 02:18 PM   #25
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Voted For: One Man Band

damn, this battle is one-sided to me....

NK - ure shit was weak to begin with, you only had a few multi's going on and shit. in my opinion you tried to incorporate a lot of big complex vocabs along with some attempted mutli's to try and make your verse seem good. but the fact is it started real weak, you picked it up to the end with some nice multies, shit was flowin well and you had the big vocabs to so props for that, its just i think that the last few bars were the only decent portion of ure verse. 5/10

OMB - a dope verse, the rhyming was pretty much basic shit but thats cool cuz we focusin on the multies. ure shit was consistently dope with multies all the way through making your verse flow perfectly. i read through the whole thing without pause which was cool, cuz with NK's i had to stop a couple of times cuz the rhymin wasnt that good. that childish shit you did at the end actually had me laughin, i thought it was cool and amusing, aint nuthin stretched either cuz of the multies so overall a nice verse. 7/10

V/ - One Man Band
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