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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
mystic chaos:
1.Ya skill’s wackness is like an illness, but son there ain’t no cures..
I’d lay down ‘the bottom line’ and it’d still be above all of urs..
^Like tha punch....No wordplay tho'...multi's(none)...But still hit...7.5/10
2.And ya wanna talk about bitin’ style, dude ur a fuckin’ spaz..
Cuz ur style wud be original……,if ur name was Daz..
^A lil personal punch..Lol. at Taking Daz style...But it couldve been better still....6/10
3.This hoe surrounds me with shit, I can’t find my way back..
I cud be ‘lost between ur accounts’, I’d still ‘find them all wack’..
^Another personal.....like this 1...Cuz N.K. does have plenty of alias names....7/10
4.Dude’s a joke really, he keeps recreating his stupid brand..
Cuz he cheats so much his accounts cud start a boy banned..(band)
^Nice play on words...I like tha Boy Bann'd part...Your best punch thus far to me..8/10
5.Kid’s a dickrider, but son……why not go ride ur own thang..
Cuz u got enough accounts for a fuckin’ full on gang-bang..
^Not really effective tah me,Maybe juss a lil...3/10
6.To me, ya combination of skill just don’t even get you near..
Shit, I’d rag on all ure alias’……but I don’t have all year..
^A personal?....It couldve been executed better..It was aiight...4.5/10
overall:6.5/10...Couldve had more multi's an better wordplay here an there....but still a coo..drop.
Natural Killa's breakdown:
1.wannabe 'n fake ain't harmin-me to ache ...too shooked to be offical
cus really...Only time you're an emcee is if you looked at ur intials...(M.C.)
^Nice play on tha name,used multi's an good structure...just tha begining is a lil off...juss a lil...8.5/10
2.got u on the hook,ur artificial...passed unknown..dented 'n sealed
cuz the terf on this battle's uneven as the astrodome's centerfeild
^this was a lil weird..didnt make sense...I get what ur tryin ta say,but failed at the play on words...2.5/10
3.spinnin up 'n down like a wheel...ur rollin of the cliff...'n u don't even know it
ur whole rep torn 'n demoted...got wins cuz the ones u got seated..voted
^Dont know if its true,but nice multi's..an good structure..well ta me atleast...6/10(cuz theres no proof)
4.none of ur lines get qouted..dickrider...i mean.. JUST ATTENDING THIS is ur goal
& if ur interest's freestylin..then the percentages are unknown..(bank/interest/his prof.)
^I dunno bout this 1....but I'll give it to you,cuz it flowed nicely...5.5/10
5.when this site found out my alias...there were 2 threads in LL on it
but..when they found out your's..everyone rolled on they head 'n just thwarted
^I need proof on this 1..Im sorry N.K.,but you lose this line...2/10
6.Efl now sucks cuz u got a battle on it....beatin a hoaz?..don't suit me
'n you changed from taz to mystic..but ur still looked at as a joke 'n looney
^I get tha alias name thing now from tha last line...I give you extra points ta make up from tha last line I dropped em on...8/10
Overall:6/10...I think you had good multi's but Failed on sum lines cuz they didnt make sense..well atleast not tah me...But you couldve got this if that 2nd line was throwin a lil better..
I give this ta Mystic Chaos...Why?
Cuz...
He came with alot of personal's..an nice punches..Tha Boy banned line did it for you....
Hey N.K. if you diss-agree...Then P.M. with tha explain'd parts that need'd ta be...An I will get my own vote DQ'd..promise..But untill then...Mystic got this..
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