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Old 10-01-05, 10:38 PM   #8
str8 up rap
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Posts: 28
From: Washington D.C
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap-
When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab//
i give this a 7.5/10 i didnt really feel this

HIV is the only thing about you that's positive
Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive//
8/10 good punch i really liked this line

Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see
But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me//
9/10--had good punch on this he took a shot at ur hometown...

I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame
Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game//
8.5/10--nice i liked this line...this is my favirote

I could see your future and it aint no record labels
A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables//
8/10--good closer....nice way to use your multi

overall: 41%


Dawg you battle newbies religiously,im given you a beatin
Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin
i give this a 8/10...nice punch

I stop and laugh ,you throwing a punch is hard to see
On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me
this line is always being used now...5/10

Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb
Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb
7/10...its was ok....ehhh

Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race
Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace
5/10 bad closer was not feeling it at all....

overall: 25%

vote goes to tha notorious for he had better flow structure n punches......
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