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Old 10-02-05, 09:10 AM   #10
Black Arts
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

this battle was weak as hell for real and i swear i didn't see a single proper punch in this.....all attempts at punches ended up coming across as statemnets n shit so that aint good.

wyteknyte you seriously need to reconsider if you're intending on coninuing to write rhymes because that was pathetic

notorious d i didnt like the way you majorly stretched your last line, that fucked up your whole flow for real but as i actually saw a couple attempts at punches i'll give this to you as it seemed that you were actually tryna make your punches connect....didnt work though but you blatantly put the most effort into your verse

v/notorious d