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Old 10-02-05, 12:31 PM   #2
PreZidict
...Liven Proof...
 
Posts: 364
From: Big Apple
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-THE GRAVE-

This house holds too many bad memories. I see you quivering,
shaking-thinking what should you do to about this agony aching.
Can't take it no more I see, feeling like your in the middle of hell,
brain cells going out of control, can't move your trapped in a cell.
there's only one thing to do to take care of this and that is to burn it,
let it go down in ashes, fire flicker while you outside- laughing.
O my son...leaving me too soon?...my woods is getting churned,
burned. Guess my time is up as you hear the father clock go
"ding dong"..as into ashes I turn.

^best part, i was feelin tha whole thing though...shit was hard, i could image it too and its creative also so 7.5/10

good shit
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